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Thank you for your great work! There are only a few comments which may help you to improve the page. | Thank you for your great work! There are only a few comments which may help you to improve the page. | ||
You could follow abc format greatly | |||
I think Dr. Gibson asked us not to make bold any part of the passage, if I am not mistaken. | *I think Dr. Gibson asked us not to make bold any part of the passage, if I am not mistaken. | ||
Some grammatical mistakes: | *Some grammatical mistakes: | ||
In historical perspective: | In historical perspective: | ||
reffered :refereed | *reffered :refereed | ||
struk down : struck | *struk down : struck | ||
centuary: century | *centuary: century | ||
*blockage of cerebral artery: blockage of a cerebral artery. | |||
Mao et. al. in his study first reported: Mao et al., in his study,(comma) | *Mao et. al. in his study first reported: Mao et al., in his study,(comma) | ||
214 Covid-19 positive hospitalized patients. with COVID-19 in Wuhan: 214 Covid-19 positive hospitalized patients with COVID-19 in Wuhan (dot) | *214 Covid-19 positive hospitalized patients. with COVID-19 in Wuhan: 214 Covid-19 positive hospitalized patients with COVID-19 in Wuhan (dot) | ||
Yaghi et. al. : Yaghi et al. | *Yaghi et. al. : Yaghi et al. | ||
*incidence of 0.9% : the incidence of 0.9% | |||
Revision as of 22:58, 12 July 2020
Thank you for your great work! There are only a few comments which may help you to improve the page.
You could follow abc format greatly
- I think Dr. Gibson asked us not to make bold any part of the passage, if I am not mistaken.
- Some grammatical mistakes:
In historical perspective:
- reffered :refereed
- struk down : struck
- centuary: century
- blockage of cerebral artery: blockage of a cerebral artery.
- Mao et. al. in his study first reported: Mao et al., in his study,(comma)
- 214 Covid-19 positive hospitalized patients. with COVID-19 in Wuhan: 214 Covid-19 positive hospitalized patients with COVID-19 in Wuhan (dot)
- Yaghi et. al. : Yaghi et al.
- incidence of 0.9% : the incidence of 0.9%